I have been working hard and putting in a lot of long hours. My book is just about to reach its climax and I can feel the tension rise in the story line.
A small excerpt Chapter 20.
Nate was almost home. He was bone weary and still did not
know how to tell Cynthia about the squaw. She was more help on the trail that
he would have thought. He was afraid that she would be a burden but he should
have known better. Teka never was.
When he woke up the next morning Teka was sitting beside
him.
“Why didn’t you wake me up when you got here?” Nate sat up
and stretched. He smelled breakfast cooking. Smelled like fish.
“She said you did not make camp until well after dark. I was
waiting until you woke up,” Teka said. “She told me what happened to you. I am
happy my tribe is not dead.”
Nate was rubbing his face with his hands. “Let’s have a cup
of coffee.”
The sat next to the fire. Nate was warming his hands. “Are
you thinking of going back to the tribe?”
“No,” Teka said. “My family is my tribe now. May and the
children would not adjust to my old way of life. I don’t think I would either.”
Nate nodded. He understood. He could not go home again. He
was happy in his new life so he did not mourn that life anymore.
I am so amazed you reached such a high word count so soon in the NaNo race! But now I see you haven't posted anything new...is the story over?! No new hints about the ending? Awww...
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