Today I am going to do something a little different.
My word count is 34,135 and I am almost finished with chapter 15.
I am only posting a paragraph.
Nate glanced back before he shut the barn door. May had stopped working and
was holding Teka’s hand looking at his face. Nate looked away. Their love
was so new it still hurt to look at. Nate went in the house to check on Cynthia.
He did not know if he loved her but he knew that he would protect her and
the children. That seemed more important to him somehow.
Hmm is sounds like the suspense is building for an important scene, I'm curious what that might be now. And "children?" Nate must have been busy! I don't remember reading that he has kids already :)
ReplyDeleteThe children came in the chapters I did not show. Expectations !
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